feedback from simon

after editing we quickly made a second roughcut ready to show simon because he was coming in the next day. when he came in we showed him our video and explained how he felt and what we needed to change. after he watched it he said that the idea we had chosen would only work if it hung together. he was referring to the transitions. he also fewlt that the voiceover needed to be louder, we knew that this was an issue so this was okay. he wanted more footage of theyounger band as well. he felt that there was too much footage of the more experienced bands and that it would put off younger bands with less experience. he wanted the logos of the coorporations involved in the video as well, i asked him if it was okay if we put them at the end and he said tht was fine. we also need to include more information. information including bands needing experience etc.

i asked him if 1.30-2.00 minutes in length would be okay and he said that a length between that would be fine.

everything that he told us is quite straight forward to improve and work on so i'm just going to make the changes that simon wants and then export the video.